Sunday, November 30, 2014

Apprehensions of long distance travellers, greater or fewer. task II ielts

< Generally, long haul travelers are always apprehensive of the place they are going to visit. Some people are of the view that such apprehensions are much higher in number today than it was; while others say that it is the other way around. • Discuss both the views and say what you feel of the second view? INtroduction Being wary of a new place is quite natural. However, the view that long distance travelers are suffering from great number of fears is not that well founded, rather there are many reasons to believe that the second view is of great significance. Second paragraph As a matter of fact, all geographies are different and people might face some challenges when they land in a new place. However, these days, the differences in social life, security, climate, food, dress, travel and local cultures are much more transparent for all, obviously barring a few. For example, Indian nationals are found in almost all nations and great many are moving out for many purposes like education, business, tourism and the like. Not many are reported to have felt greater apprehensions on a new place. This indicates that long distance mobility leaves much fewer apprehensions than before. Third paragraph The first view seems to be a little exaggerated. The thing is that there are some places that are sensitive and one’s maiden visit to such a place may raise some concerns on security, mobility, stay, and gender disparity and so on. But, the extent of such instances is so limited compared to the other side of the world where we experience an all compassing attitude of association through human capital export, tourism, trade, commerce, diplomacy and so goes the list. Maybe there are a few sporadic cases where travelers might undergo some fears on racism, cultural bias and the like. Conclusion Concluding the discussion, what I feel of the second view is that there are enormous possibilities for transnational travelers to be confident and they do not need to be scary or wary of anything. There may be isolated locations where the story may not be that rosy. It seems to me that certain apprehensions are based on hearsays. 285 words Ajaypeesdoc. 30. 11.14 Google. Vaatupura A. Jayaprakash

Gender disparity in the richer world too. task two by biji Scotland

Even highly developed countries seem to be falling short of gender equality expectations and many countries have failed to close the gender gap. • Why is gender inequality so persistent around the world? • What suggestions can you make so that genders can be brought closer? INtroduction These days, many countries try to reduce gender inequalities, but this is not possible due to various reasons. It is a socially relevant issue and needs to be addressed carefully. This essay will examine various cause and possible solutions to this problem. Second para It is true to say that gender inequality is still prevalent in today’s advanced world. The first and the foremost is the lack of education. At present, in some remote areas of certain countries, education is not possible due to lack of infrastructure and resources. Another factor is social bias. In many countries, it is commonly believed that men are superior to women in all aspects. Traditionally, it is a notion that women tend to do household work. This concept may still persist in some areas, even though women rub shoulders with men. Moreover, certain people believe that men are undoubtedly adapted genetically to perform physically exerting tasks. As a result, women try to move away from these paths. Third para There are various solutions to reduce these inequalities. Education is the first battle to reduce this problem. Education broadens mind of the people and prepare them to accept and respect. In addition, government should implement various rules to protect women and improve their position in every field based on their ability. Moreover, they should increase women’s participation in political and other decision-making processes, along with motivating them from household tasks to national and international levels. This would definitely change society’s attitude towards women and encourage their participation in every field. These measures definitely reduce gender gap. Conclusion From the above mentioned points, it can be concluded that gender inequities can be minimized wisely by adopting a few pro-active measures. The resistance this inequality maintains is generated out of a history of evolution that is as old as human life.

Wednesday, November 26, 2014

Even highly developed countries seem to be falling short of gender equality expectations and they have failed to close the gender gap. • Why is gender inequality so persistent even in the richer part of the world? • What suggestions can you make so that genders can be brought closer? Question over INtroduction It is not derogatory to say that genders are not equal. This inequality is written on the wall, and greater development indices of a nation are not that strong enough to erase these wordings in a fine morning. Anyway, there are wayouts take them closer. 45 words First paragraph The thing that keeps this disparity deeply ingrained in the minds of the people world over is nothing but the genetic difference. For example, human race for millennia has been living with this difference, and the same gets reflected of goes much more visible wherever greater number of men and women happen to be together. There is no wonder, in rich countries, they both get greater chances to identify themselves as genetically different. This disparity could be in terms of their respective roles associated with family, personal attributes and prowess, distinct priorities and preferences in participation. This condition is relevant everywhere. 100 words. Second paragraph This deeply embedded genetic gender coding notwithstanding, there are ways to bring them closer. My suggestion is responsible parenting. New generation parents must stop craving for boys or girls, rather they must wait for babies, and the later be brought up like equals. This sense of equality may get percolated to social and professional circles too. Secondly, employers and socially relevant institutions must realize the fact that both the genders are unique beings with obvious differences, and this difference should not give way to severe gender disparity. This internalizing may keep them closer, closer than they are now. 95 Conclusion My conclusion is human race, the richer included, will never be able to enjoy gender equality all the ages to come. But, there are many other ways to minimize the distance every passing day than the ones I have mentioned. Gender equality is a pipe dream. 45 words 285 words Ajaypeesdoc. 26.11.14

Tuesday, November 25, 2014

Planning life and unpredictability. ielts essay

Some people believe that a person’s future can be planned and executed. But some others hold the view that life is so unpredictable that planning one’s future would not work as we expect. Discuss both the views and say what you feel about the unpredictability of life. Introduction There are differing views on future. Some say, it can be organized and carried out while others hold onto the uncertainty of life and believe that the plans for future may not work out. Let me discuss these two views. second paragraph It is a fact that planning life has been a practice for ages, and many have been successful too. The primary thing is that there are certain things that can be planned. For example, if a child wishes to become an aeronautical engineer, certainly, his parents can guide him in such a way and he would turn out to be one. Great many people have become what they have wanted themselves to be by meticulous planning. Clearing tough exams that take people to high profile jobs, becoming famous or whatever is, to an extent, possible. third paragraph This possibility notwithstanding, there is always room for the unknown, and many people may fail to execute their future plans. The rationale of it may be that we do not know what is in store for us, either good or bad. As they say, man may just propose. Besides, there are people who have become someone out of sheer luck. Similar is the case with those who happen to wake up to a cursed day that would change their life upside down. Diagnosing a severe disease condition is enough to sabotage our plans. Conclusion Discussing both the views, I am inclined to believe that the unpredictability element is there in the lives of all. Those who plan their future and those who do not are part of it. Sometimes, the very same advocates of unpredictability themselves may be able to enjoy great future out of no planning at all; unpredictably.

Saturday, November 22, 2014

Juveniles age limit to lowered to 15 from 18 Task 2

The types of crime children less than eighteen years happen to commit these days are as severe and coldblooded as those being done by seasoned adult criminals. Therefore, there is a demand from some judicial circles that juvenile age-limit needs to be brought down from eighteen to fifteen years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea? Introduction Trialing juveniles has always been a tricky issue for the judiciary. It is becoming increasingly difficult today as many children are showing the traits of hardcore criminals. In this respect, to a greater extent, it right to bring down their age limit to fifteen, obviously, on certain conditions. Next para No one would deny the fact that a crime is a crime whoever does it, and it is against normal human life. Naturally, the judiciary has to ensure that ordinary life is kept safer. For example, there are media reports from across the world describing gory stories of children less than 18 years wielding guns and taking ordinary people hostage. Such children cannot be trialed as juveniles. Next para Besides this, seasoned criminals may make use of this under-eighteen loophole to carry out their designs. Let me site an example. Many adult criminals rope in misguided juveniles, and the latter are made to own up coldblooded crimes promising huge monitory offers. Besides all these, today’s under-eighteen children are much more informed and better-built than their old counterpart. The world must take this physical aspect while trialing such offenders. Next para All these arguments notwithstanding, there may be cases in which even just-under-eighteen-year olds may commit crimes either for their life or for the life their near ones. Such cases need to be treated as juvenile cases; of course, based on solid evidences and testimonies. conclusion My conclusion is that the child offenders under-eighteen may be just one percent and there may be hardcore cases involving children as young as fifteen years as well. Here the court must ensure that the jury is always in all through the proceedings. Juvenile age-limit may be lowered to fifteen. Ajaypeesdoc. 275 words. 23.11.14. www.jpsukham.blogspot.com

Ielts task one comparisom

1. Comparisons between sentences One way to make comparisons is to start a new sentence with a word/phrase that shows that you are about to make a comparison with the previous sentence. The basic words you need here are: In contrast The most popular form of holiday among the Welsh was self-catering with over 60% choosing to cook for themselves. In contrast, only 5 % of the English chose this form of vacation and hotel accommodation was much more popular at 48%. In comparison Almost 50% of the English, Scots and Northern Irish chose to stay in a hotel for their holiday. In comparison, staying in self-catering accommodation was much less popular with around 10% of people choosing this. However The general pattern was for hotel accommodation to be the most popular with around half the people choosing it. The majority of the Welsh, however, chose to stay in self-catering accommodation. On the other hand It is clear that a majority of the British chose to stay in hotel for their holiday. On the other hand, there was an exception to this because over 50% of the Welsh opted for self-catering accommodation. Note that we normally use a comma after In contrast and In comparison. Note that there are lots of different ways to use compare and contrast and these are just the most basic examples. If you are looking for a higher band score, it’s good advice to learn different ways to use these words. Note too that typically however is not used as the first word in a sentence. 2. Comparisons within sentences Another possibility is to compare two pieces of information within the same sentence. The basic words you need here are: while While there are 4 million miles of train lines in the UK, there are only 3 million in France. whereas Whereas the majority of the French prefer to travel to work by train, only a small minority of the British do. although Although 15% of the French read novels, only 5% of the British do. but Almost 25% of French females study maths with a private tutor, but nearly 60% study English with one. 3. Comparisons with more or less/fewer This is another obvious way to make comparisons and contrasts. You should note though that you are normally going to compare numbers and nouns and not adjectives. You want to remember these two key bit of grammar: Than Remember that after more/less/fewer we use than 5% more girls chose to read books than go to cinema. Fewer/less If the word is uncountable we use less, if it is countable we use fewer: Fewer mobiles phones were bought in 2013 than 2014. Less oil was consumed in 2013 than 2014. 4. Qualify your comparisons with much/far/slightly or a number This is similar. The idea here is that you still use less/more/fewer but this time you explain how much. Typically, the best way to do this is to use a number: Far fewer people chose to travel by train than by car. [Where’s the detail?] 25% fewer people chose to travel by train than by car. [Better now we have detail and not just a comparison] 5. Comparisons with most or least/fewest When you are looking for details to include, the highest/lowest number is almost always important. This too is a form of comparison. The most popular form of entertainment in the UK was going to the cinema. The least common form of transport was taking a taxi. 6. Comparisons with similar or same or as…..as Don’t forget that some of the numbers you will be comparing are similar. These are the basic words and structures you need.
< The bar graph gives an information about various type of games played by children in PACANS for the period of 15 years from 1990 to 2005.The x-axis indicates the years and y-axis shows the numbers of children with interval of 500. The most noticeable trend is cricket was the most popular game and fewer children played football during these years. In the 1990 and 1995, almost same number of children played cricket, that was 2000. Then in the following years, it can be seen that, it dramatically changed to almost 4000 in 2005.Meanwhile, only 1000 students played football in1990but its rate was raised throughout the years and reached to 2000in2005.Where as, hockey was played by 1000 students in 1995 and in the next 10 years it rose up to 3500 in 2000 but in the next 5 years its popularity declined to 2500 in 2000. To sum up, overall view of the graph shows that children’s interest in cricket and football increased but there was decreased number of children played hockey.
< Some social scientists are of the view that it is time for the world to see climate change through a moral prism as there are solid evidences to show that it is real and carbon is the culprit. Discuss this view and see how right the social scientists are. Climate change has been a refrain for decades, and there were skeptics who did not accept the carbon-and-climate-change equation. However, now it is on the face of the world and, some say there is a moral issue in it. Let me see it through such an angle. The whole world over the years had been willfully ignorant of the carbon-begotten climate change. There had been discussions and arguments in circles as big as Global Summits on how carbon has been harming global climate. Simultaneously, nations of all makes went on producing carbon callously. In between, no nation has ever asked a question; “is this mounting carbon footprint going to harm the world in any way?” They were blind to the truth that the world is circle and no one could live in isolation. This blindness has been a moral breach, of course. Now, studies have made it clear that carbon is going sabotage the world climate sooner than later. That is, things have come to such a pass that, unless all of us are able to ask ourselves a simple moral question whenever we happen do something to better our lives. The question is, is it going to put in anything harmful to the already-pressed global climate? If it is in the affirmative, there is a moral issue involved. No doubt, the scientists warn, the world must realize that when one part of the world is immoral in their actions, the other part cannot be free from its effects. The thing with social scientists is that climate change as such may have countless implications and dimensions, but the world can no longer be ignorant of the moral side of carbon menace. It is immoral to be carbon-producing, the social scientists seem to sound so. A jaypeesdoc. 280 words 20.11.14
The question – a holiday competition letter You won a competition and received a vacation for two as a prize. Write a letter to ask them to go on holiday with you. In the letter, you should: • tell him/her about the competition you won, • state what kind of vacation it is, • explain why you would like him/her to go on holiday with you My model answer Dear Pablo, I’ve got some really exciting news to share with you. Guess what? I’ve won a holiday for two people in a competition. I do hope that you can come with me. All I had to do to win the competition was write a slogan for a local travel agency. My winning submission was “Fly LTC and see the world”. As I said, my prize is a holiday and it is a cruise around the Mediterranean for a fortnight. The ship is the latest luxury liner and has all sorts ofentertainment facilities including a swimming pool, a cinema complex and onboard tennis courts. It sounds as if it should be great fun. I really hope that you are available sometime this summer. I’d love it if you could come with me, as it sounds just your cup of tea and you could always act as an interpreter for me when we get to Spain! I need to book the cruise quite soon, so just drop me a line if you are free. All the best Angela You should understand from this question that you need to make the letter informal as you are writing to a friend and that the key vocabulary you need relates to holidays.
The question – a holiday competition letter You won a competition and received a vacation for two as a prize. Write a letter to ask them to go on holiday with you. In the letter, you should: • tell him/her about the competition you won, • state what kind of vacation it is, • explain why you would like him/her to go on holiday with you My model answer Dear Pablo, First para I’ve got some really exciting news to share with you. Guess what? I’ve won a holiday for two people in a competition. I do hope that you can come with me. second para All I had to do to win the competition was write a slogan for a local travel agency. My winning submission was “Fly LTC and see the world”. As I said, my prize is a holiday and it is a cruise around the Mediterranean for a fortnight. The ship is the latest luxury liner and has all sorts ofentertainment facilities including a swimming pool, a cinema complex and onboard tennis courts. It sounds as if it should be great fun. third para I really hope that you are available sometime this summer. I’d love it if you could come with me, as it sounds just your cup of tea and you could always act as an interpreter for me when we get to Spain! closure I need to book the cruise quite soon, so just drop me a line if you are free. All the best Angela You should understand from this question that you need to make the letter informal as you are writing to a friend and that the key vocabulary you need relates to holidays.

Model letter for task one GT ielts

The question You have just bought a new mobile phone from a website on the internet. When it was delivered, the phone was faulty. Write a letter to the website. In the letter: • introduce yourself • explain the situation • state what action you want to be taken • Read the letter of complaint Dear Sirs, I am writing to you to complain about the mobile I bought from your online store on 23rd November. I have been a loyal customer of yours for the last 4 years and have successfully made many purchases in course of time. Unfortunately, however, this time I am dissatisfied with the service you have provided. The mobile telephone I ordered was the latest smart phone, the Samsung Android SA23. My reason for choosing this model was that you advertised it on your website as having the new Swipe texting system and complete social network support. Unfortunately, neither of these functions works properly. When I try to write a text message, the system either crashes or switches into Chinese and does not recognize the words. Likewise, the telephone does not have the advertised complete social network support, and I am unable to upload photographs to Twitter and Face book. For these reasons, I would ask you either to refund the purchase price in full or send me a replacement handset. I look forward to your immediate response. Yours faithfully
The headwords in list 1 of the Academic Word List Please note that these are old exercises and do not come with lessons. They will be updated as soon as possible! Try the following academic words when you write essays. use a dictionary to find the different shades of meaning, like, adjectival, adverbial, verb, noun, participial, gerund, past and perfect and the like analysis approach area assess assume authority available benefit concept consistent constitute context contract create data define derive distribution economy environment establish estimate evident export factor finance formula function identify income indicate individual interpret involve issue labour legal legislate major method occur percent period policy principle proceed process require research respond role section sector significant similar source specific structure theory vary
Context; how it is used in daily life 1. We need to examine this problem in the context of mass immigration. 2. It is important not to lose sight of the context. 3. It is unfair to quote someone out of context. 4. The historical context is all important here. 5. The issue of mass immigration has to be seen in context.
Today's word is context Notes This is one of the more academic words in the Academic Word List but it can still be used in more general writing with the meaning of situation. Forms of the word context (noun) contextual (adjective) contextualise (verb) Using the word in Falling sales of books need to be seen in the context of a market which is dominated by multimedia. out of Sometimes quotations can be misunderstood when they are taken out of context. historical/social/political etc It is important to take account of the social context when considering gang culture.

Thursday, November 20, 2014

Climate change and moral issue on carbon ielts essay

< Some social scientists are of the view that it is time for the world to see climate change through a moral prism as there are solid evidences to show that it is real and carbon is the culprit. Discuss this view and see how right the social scientists are. introduction Climate change has been a refrain for decades, and there were skeptics who did not accept the carbon-and-climate-change equation. However, now it is on the face of the world and, some say there is a moral issue in it. Let me see it through such an angle. next para The whole world over the years had been willfully ignorant of the carbon-begotten climate change. There had been discussions and arguments in circles as big as Global Summits on how carbon has been harming global climate. Simultaneously, nations of all makes went on producing carbon callously. In between, no nation has ever asked a question; “is this mounting carbon footprint going to harm the world in any way?” They were blind to the truth that the world is circle and no one could live in isolation. This blindness has been a moral breach, of course. Next para Now, studies have made it clear that carbon is going sabotage the world climate sooner than later. That is, things have come to such a pass that, unless all of us are able to ask ourselves a simple moral question whenever we happen do something to better our lives. The question is, is it going to put in anything harmful to the already-pressed global climate? If it is in the affirmative, there is a moral issue involved. No doubt, the scientists warn, the world must realize that when one part of the world is immoral in their actions, the other part cannot be free from its effects. Conclusion The thing with social scientists is that climate change as such may have countless implications and dimensions, but the world can no longer be ignorant of the moral side of carbon menace. It is immoral to be carbon-producing, the social scientists seem to sound so. A jaypeesdoc. 280 words 20.11.14

Sunday, November 16, 2014

Hunger and epidemics are twins


Hunger and epidemics are twins. Discuss Ajaypeesdoc. Japyeestask2161114004 “If hunger comes, can epidemics be far behind”. As a matter of fact, these two are twins, and their hold on any population is nothing short of devastation and degeneration. Let me have discussion on it. Hunger is the most despicable of human conditions, and it is able to take people to their elements leaving no room for any kind of compunction. The hungry would go to any extent keep the wolf at bay at any cost. Barring the direct it has one the hungry, hunger is a double-sword capable of lynching people from all sides. For example, a hungry person is not only prone to degeneration elements of life, rather he or she is also vulnerable to deadly disease conditions. Hunger stifles people and makes them fragile with poor immune. When immune is weak, what follows is the onslaught of viruses, killers to be precise. Therefore, it is very right to say that hunger gives birth to epidemics. If we examine history, even the latest developments in the African geographies, we may be able to see that wherever there had been hunger, where there had been deadly killers too. For example, Ebola has been killing people in Liberia for quite some time, and we all know that Liberia has been running short of food and great many families go to bed hungry. Actually, hunger was giving a strong foothold to Ebola. Hunger kills in two ways. Hunger, in short, is so close to epidemics. Naturally, it can re-generate many other social evils that man has been able to eradicate spending ages. Epidemics are begotten by hunger. It is right to say, in many more ways than one, that epidemics and hunger share the same womb. 280 words Ajaypeesdoc.16.11.14

Saturday, November 15, 2014

Many legal systems find it extremely hard to deal with children who happen to commit offences that are normally done by adults. Some say such cases need to be dealt with as adult crimes while others say the judiciary needs to be considerate with such children. • Which view do you support and state why oppose the other?

IELTS task II on Child offenders and legal immuinity

Jaypeestask2161114003 Many legal systems find it extremely hard to deal with children who happen to commit offences that are normally done by adults. Some say such cases need to be dealt with as adult crimes while others say the judiciary needs to be considerate with such children. • Which view do you support and state why oppose the other? The legal hassle, minors against the law of the land, has always put jurists in fixes, and there are differing views on how to handle them. I find it, however, right to go with the idea of taking such children in a more humane manner than giving them an adult-shade. Obviously, there are alternative ways. Introduction ends At the outset, we all must admit the fact that children do not have any vile intentions per se. This fact notwithstanding, many are found to be against the law. But the most unfortunate thing is that this sensitive and vulnerable population segment, most of the time, is prone to temptations. In India, to exemplify, huge number of under-age offenders end up in courtrooms. But, most of their trial records have something in common; unintentional crime. Here what is clear is children hardly recognize the magnitude of the crimes they commit, and they do it when they are driven to the wall.first para ends The story is different with adults who resort to crimes in a premeditated manner most of the time. An intentional offence is a threat to any society. It does not mean that the offences children commit are threat-free. That is not reason enough to treat such cases as adult cases because all civilized societies treat children considerately and their actions are not equated with those done by adults. Naturally, they should be immune to the proceedings of adult crimes. Children cannot be legally punished.second para ends Conclusion begins The inference is that minors against law must get a different court of justice, and no legal system can augur well of itself if ever a child offence is treated like an adult-done one, however grave that crime is. Ajaypeesdoc. 280 words 16.11.14

Talent pool shortage and poor status of naitons

Some say talent pool shortage is the reason for the prolonged poor status of poor nations. But this views is opposed by others saying that it is the unwise management of the talent that does the job. • Discuss both the views and say what you feel of talent management in poor nations. It has been quite long since the world started hearing about poor nations. In this respect, the view that talent shortage is the reason for their prolonged poor status short of substance and the second view sounds really well founded. 40 words The school of talent pool deficit may be based on the assumption that the poor are poor in all respects. But it is not so. There are innumerable instances to prove that the talent pool of the poor is so rich. Firstly, the statistics on human capital export from poor nations is reason enough to prove that. Besides this, multinational companies from the richer parts of the world are outsourcing great number of jobs to poor nations, especially to Asia. In entertainment, sports, business, literature, administration R and D and the like are brimming with talent. 95 words Actually, in these poor geographies talent is callously managed. It happens like this. Corruption, poor political will, money and favoritism are the elements that dictate things. Asian countries are notorious for this. Naturally, their talent pool neither rightly acknowledged nor very well assessed or wisely assigned. The result is talents go either unemployed or underemployed or unidentified. For example, delayed employment, running for facilities and, finally, throwing up the towel and flying off the country are very common. The available talent is not put to right use. 85 words The discussion, in short, reveals that the first view on talent does not hold any water, but the second is the other way round. Analyzing both, what I feel is that, in poor many poor nations, diverse exceptional talents are not allowed to work for the uplift of these countries; to the ranks of the rich. 55 words Ajaypeesdoc 275 words 13.11.14
Jaypeesieltstask213112014.001 Some say talent pool shortage is the reason for the prolonged poor status of poor nations. But this views is opposed by others saying that it is the unwise management of the talent that does the job. • Discuss both the views and say what you feel of talent management in poor nations. It has been quite long since the world started hearing about poor nations. In this respect, the view that talent shortage is the reason for their prolonged poor status short of substance and the second view sounds really well founded. 40 words (The writer disagrees with the first and goes well with the second) The school of talent pool deficit may be based on the assumption (an observation) that the poor are poor in all respects. But it is not so. There are innumerable instances to prove that the talent pool of the poor is so rich. (Trying to make his stance clear) Firstly, the statistics on human capital export from poor nations is reason enough to prove that. Besides this, multinational companies from the richer parts of the world are outsourcing great number of jobs to poor nations, especially to Asia. (Proved again that there is talent pool). Talents from entertainment, sports, literature, administration, R and D and the like are making great business strides all over the world. (wound up by touching a few others) 95 words Actually, in these poor geographies talent is callously managed. (Mede the stance clear) It happens like this. Corruption, poor political will, money and favoritism are the elements that dictate things. Asian countries are notorious for this. (Substantiated with examples) Naturally, their talent pool neither rightly acknowledged nor very well assessed or wisely assigned. (derived a conclusion) The result is talents go either unemployed or underemployed or unidentified. For example, delayed employment, running for facilities and, finally, throwing up the towel and flying off the country are very common. The available talent is not put to right use. (Sealed without any room for confusion that talent is spoilt) 85 words The discussion, in short, reveals that the first view on talent does not hold any water, (restated the position in the intro in other words) but the second is the other way round (proved that right). Analyzing both, what I feel is that, (that part is answered) in many poor nations, diverse exceptional talents are not allowed to work for the uplift of these countries; to the ranks of the rich. 55 words Ajaypeesdoc 275 words 13.11.14 Concentrating on the brackets and the bold words that precede, please see the question once and see for yourself how that question transforms into an essay of 275 words. Look for the vocabulary on talent, poor nations, management and the like. Look for punctuation and connectors See the paragraphing Take note of how examples are put to use And finally just know that paragraphs have a beginning, a growth and maturity and a close.

The eco.imbalance by urban and rural lands

All the efforts being taken by ordinary people around the world towards environmental well being are spoiled by the fast urbanization exercises that are being carried out in several pockets like metros the world over. • Discuss. Environmental health is a concern for the whole world and the common folks are doing great things towards it. But the sad thing is that their inputs are imbalance by the urban expansion exercises. This, obviously, is a relevant topic of discussion. First of all, we must see how ordinary people around the world are doing their share not to harm the environment any further. Basically, the waste they generate is not huge or harmful, the comforts and convenience they enjoy are limited leaving much little room for any harm to the ecology. For example, ordinary people in the countryside burn much less power than the people elsewhere and so is the case with the fuels and similar essentials. This positive attitude to the environment is much deeper in then as evidenced by the extent of green cover they keep. Obviously, their respective geographies are able to breathe easier too. However, the world must not forget the fact that the urban landscapes are getting expanded much faster than ever, and the damages they generates are many times higher and the efforts the rest of the world is taking are being upset ruthlessly. For example, the carbon footprint felt in urban landscapes is hundred times higher than what is read in semi-urban or rural areas. The result is the breather achieved by the less developed areas towards ecological health is being hijacked by urban development explosions. This is a sad state of affairs indeed. It is clear that there is great concern in the way the urban landscapes handle the environment, and the efforts of the much less harming human lives elsewhere are sabotaged by the urbanites. The world must discuss it in the upcoming Climate Summits. 280 words Ajaypeesdoc. 16.11.04