Jaypeesieltstask213112014.001 Some say talent pool shortage is the reason for the prolonged poor status of poor nations. But this views is opposed by others saying that it is the unwise management of the talent that does the job. • Discuss both the views and say what you feel of talent management in poor nations. It has been quite long since the world started hearing about poor nations. In this respect, the view that talent shortage is the reason for their prolonged poor status short of substance and the second view sounds really well founded. 40 words (The writer disagrees with the first and goes well with the second) The school of talent pool deficit may be based on the assumption (an observation) that the poor are poor in all respects. But it is not so. There are innumerable instances to prove that the talent pool of the poor is so rich. (Trying to make his stance clear) Firstly, the statistics on human capital export from poor nations is reason enough to prove that. Besides this, multinational companies from the richer parts of the world are outsourcing great number of jobs to poor nations, especially to Asia. (Proved again that there is talent pool). Talents from entertainment, sports, literature, administration, R and D and the like are making great business strides all over the world. (wound up by touching a few others) 95 words Actually, in these poor geographies talent is callously managed. (Mede the stance clear) It happens like this. Corruption, poor political will, money and favoritism are the elements that dictate things. Asian countries are notorious for this. (Substantiated with examples) Naturally, their talent pool neither rightly acknowledged nor very well assessed or wisely assigned. (derived a conclusion) The result is talents go either unemployed or underemployed or unidentified. For example, delayed employment, running for facilities and, finally, throwing up the towel and flying off the country are very common. The available talent is not put to right use. (Sealed without any room for confusion that talent is spoilt) 85 words The discussion, in short, reveals that the first view on talent does not hold any water, (restated the position in the intro in other words) but the second is the other way round (proved that right). Analyzing both, what I feel is that, (that part is answered) in many poor nations, diverse exceptional talents are not allowed to work for the uplift of these countries; to the ranks of the rich. 55 words Ajaypeesdoc 275 words 13.11.14 Concentrating on the brackets and the bold words that precede, please see the question once and see for yourself how that question transforms into an essay of 275 words. Look for the vocabulary on talent, poor nations, management and the like. Look for punctuation and connectors See the paragraphing Take note of how examples are put to use And finally just know that paragraphs have a beginning, a growth and maturity and a close.