Globalization as a matter of fact has been able to make visible changes in the ordinary lives of man. However, human life has become vulnerable to several unhealthy conditions. How are these two faces of globalization getting reflected in your place? You cite examples taken from your surroundings.

An Answer by Jyothi Midhun. (Mrs)

To be processed in the class

For some quite some years, the world has been witnessing immense changes in all fields thanks to globalization. Of course, it has contributed many great things for the world, but the bad effects of globalization outweigh all that great things. In this essay, I am trying to see the good and bad faces of globalization. 55 words

The problem faced by my locality is relation to waste disposal. My home town is a small and it is not a densely populated place either. But the extent of waste is very high. I strongly believe that it is the result of the use and throw culture generated by consumerism, a byproduct of globalization. For example, it is hard to a product without a little waste attached to it, let be degradable or not. With the influence of consumerism, people buy unwanted things and after some days, they discard them in their surroundings. What happens next is the government authorities collect and dump these wastes somewhere and it contribute to many health problems to the local people. In my locality, Vadavathoor is the place where the municipality dumps these wastes. The people in and around this area are suffering a lot from this. This is a byproduct of globalization. 150

In the past, hospitals had a face of service. But nowadays, hospital business is the most profitable business. It is because of globalization. In addition, there is great change in the food habits of people. The number of eateries has risen and, as a result, people get different foods that are not part of their food regime. Naturally, they get affected by many disease conditions. Simultaneously, healthcare facilities too have taken up changes and they offer services which were once available in foreign countries. Simply taking a cursory look around, one may understand how big hospital business is. Above all these, these hospitals dispose of all sorts of medical wastes, putting yet another threat to the society. 115

In short, in this era, human life is not safe because of these practices. So, the only thing we can do is to be wise enough to appreciate the brighter aspects of globalization and manage the ugly aspects it as globalization has both angelic and diabolic dimensions. We cannot help it. 50

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• Too much concentration on the ugly face of globalization
• There are not enough examples to show that it has a positive side
• The first part should have been the second part
• Extremely over length and exhaustive
• Too long paragraphs
• Coherence is affected

Very good vocabulary

Structure and usages are fine for a seven

Very good spelling

Punctuation is not bad either