Unemployment in poor nations: lack of initiative and poor education. IELTS essay

The lack of individual initiative and employment friendly education are the major reasons for unemployment in developing nations.

How far is this true in your opinion?

Intro:
Severe
Available
Reasons
Dignity
Standard
Not industry-friendly

True to a great extent

Personal preferences
Unwilling to take risk
White colour mindset
Paper qualifications
Poor skill sets
Demanding job providers
Non-employability
Dwindling confidence levels

There are other factors too.

Rich poor gap
Cost of education
Rural urban disparities
Lack of vision
Infrastructure

It is right:

If there is a will
Full of employment
Industry-friendly
‘Responsible education’
It is the attitude

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