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Today children in their younger age itself happen to spend a lot of time online. For some people this rising Internet time is a matter of a little concern whereas there some others who feel that today’s children cannot do without being online.
• Do you think the first opinion has got some relevance?
• How far is it right to say that being online is inevitable for children?
Intr:
• Here to stay
• Room for worry.
• Part of their life
First para
1. Some pitfalls.
2. Wrong influences
3. Fall prey
4. Facebook, Tweeter and Blogs
5. A little danger,
Second para
• Cannot be away
• Great benefits
• Changing academic ambience.
• Activity and research oriented studies
• Great favours.
Concl:
1. Just relative.
2. Not so harmful for all
3. Not so useful for all.
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Additional points if you need
First para: RISKS: social life, physical activity, health, academic work
Second para: GAINS: soft skills, spirit of search and research, friends, outlook
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Friday, April 8, 2011
Today children in their younger age itself happen to spend a lot of time online. For some people this rising Internet time is a matter of a little concern whereas there some others who feel that today’s children cannot do without being online.
• Do you think the first opinion has got some relevance?
• How far is it right to say that being online is inevitable for children?
The Net is here to stay and not many can do without it. As a matter of fact, the rising internet time found among young children leaves a little room for worry. However, the fact remains that it has become part of their life in more ways than one.
When it comes to the concerns, it is right to say that there are some pitfalls. Children are children and they are prone to influences of all types. Naturally, the Net, being a virtual platform that remains spread across the world, poorly informed and misguided children may fall prey to many unhealthy practices. For example, community cites like Facebook, Tweeter and Blogs are useful only if they are wisely managed. Else, children may get trapped in cyber based snares and their associated criminal, asocial behaviours. There is a little danger, of course.
All the dangers notwithstanding, modern children cannot keep themselves off the possibilities of the Net. Inquisitive and enterprising little kids can reap great benefits out of the borderless possibilities out of the Internet. This is more so when it is juxtaposed to today’s fast changing academic ambience. Here every child is expected to find material and information to meet their specific academic requirements and personal expectations. For example, today’s curriculum is more activity and research oriented than text-based or teacher-centered. Here the Internet can do children great favours.
In short, what I feel is that Internet-based problems and prospects for children are just relative. So it is difficult to say that it is all the way harmful for all children or it is equally useful for all. It depends on how children are guided to the Net. Better parenting needs to make the Internet child-safe.
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• Do you think the first opinion has got some relevance?
• How far is it right to say that being online is inevitable for children?
The Net is here to stay and not many can do without it. As a matter of fact, the rising internet time found among young children leaves a little room for worry. However, the fact remains that it has become part of their life in more ways than one.
When it comes to the concerns, it is right to say that there are some pitfalls. Children are children and they are prone to influences of all types. Naturally, the Net, being a virtual platform that remains spread across the world, poorly informed and misguided children may fall prey to many unhealthy practices. For example, community cites like Facebook, Tweeter and Blogs are useful only if they are wisely managed. Else, children may get trapped in cyber based snares and their associated criminal, asocial behaviours. There is a little danger, of course.
All the dangers notwithstanding, modern children cannot keep themselves off the possibilities of the Net. Inquisitive and enterprising little kids can reap great benefits out of the borderless possibilities out of the Internet. This is more so when it is juxtaposed to today’s fast changing academic ambience. Here every child is expected to find material and information to meet their specific academic requirements and personal expectations. For example, today’s curriculum is more activity and research oriented than text-based or teacher-centered. Here the Internet can do children great favours.
In short, what I feel is that Internet-based problems and prospects for children are just relative. So it is difficult to say that it is all the way harmful for all children or it is equally useful for all. It depends on how children are guided to the Net. Better parenting needs to make the Internet child-safe.
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Six task two questions and their possible introductions: right introduction is the first step to a better score.
1. It is argued that right to employment is a fundamental right and, if a State fails to engage its educated and productive manpower in some worthwhile income generating mode, it may be deemed as a case of violation of human rights.
Essay 001
• Argue for and against this view.
The argument that right to employment is a fundamental right is well founded because the educated are the ones who keep the nation growing. So their employment is the responsibility of the State. However, opinions differ when we take it as a violation of rights if the state fails in it.
2. Promoting and protecting the health of women is of greater importance in terms of social welfare not only for the health of present generation but also for all the generations to come.
Essay 009
• Substantiate this argument with evidence to support it.
• How can we promote and protect the health of women?
Social welfare involves several factors, and most important one among them is the health status of people. In this respect, ensuring women’s health is more important than anything else. This is for today and for tomorrow, too. Of course, there are ways to achieve this goal.
3. While conventional games were physically, socially and intellectually charging, new generation games are found to be the other way round; making participants passive and enervating.
Essay 014
• To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Games of olden times had many dimensions; social, physical and so on. Such games, naturally, fostered many faculties in several different ways. However, what we have today in the name of games, to a greater extent, are not so involving as to make the participants any better.
4. Many people feel that development is likely to erode the cultural values of a place no matter where the development takes place.
Essay 020
• How far do you agree or disagree with this?
• Prove your points with examples taken from your life or surroundings.
Since change is natural and development is but change, the possibility for change in cultural values too is possible in today’s fast paced world. It is true to a great extent that, irrespective of place and time, development changes values.
5. Many people feel that development is likely to erode the cultural values of a place no matter where the development takes place.
Essay 020
• How far do you agree or disagree with this?
• Prove your points with examples taken from your life or surroundings.
Since change is natural and development is but change, the possibility for change in cultural values too is possible in today’s fast paced world. It is true to a great extent that, irrespective of place and time, development changes values.
6. Better teacher-student understanding and student-friendly academic ambience will be able to remove corporal punishment from schools for ever.
Essay 025
• How far do you agree or disagree with this?
There is saying: “spare the rode and spoil the child”. But studies show that sparing the rod may save a child, not spoil one. Since this finding goes exactly in line with the idea that teacher-student-friendly academic milieu will spare the rod for ever, I for one stand for such a student-friendly school.
1. It is argued that right to employment is a fundamental right and, if a State fails to engage its educated and productive manpower in some worthwhile income generating mode, it may be deemed as a case of violation of human rights.
Essay 001
• Argue for and against this view.
The argument that right to employment is a fundamental right is well founded because the educated are the ones who keep the nation growing. So their employment is the responsibility of the State. However, opinions differ when we take it as a violation of rights if the state fails in it.
2. Promoting and protecting the health of women is of greater importance in terms of social welfare not only for the health of present generation but also for all the generations to come.
Essay 009
• Substantiate this argument with evidence to support it.
• How can we promote and protect the health of women?
Social welfare involves several factors, and most important one among them is the health status of people. In this respect, ensuring women’s health is more important than anything else. This is for today and for tomorrow, too. Of course, there are ways to achieve this goal.
3. While conventional games were physically, socially and intellectually charging, new generation games are found to be the other way round; making participants passive and enervating.
Essay 014
• To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Games of olden times had many dimensions; social, physical and so on. Such games, naturally, fostered many faculties in several different ways. However, what we have today in the name of games, to a greater extent, are not so involving as to make the participants any better.
4. Many people feel that development is likely to erode the cultural values of a place no matter where the development takes place.
Essay 020
• How far do you agree or disagree with this?
• Prove your points with examples taken from your life or surroundings.
Since change is natural and development is but change, the possibility for change in cultural values too is possible in today’s fast paced world. It is true to a great extent that, irrespective of place and time, development changes values.
5. Many people feel that development is likely to erode the cultural values of a place no matter where the development takes place.
Essay 020
• How far do you agree or disagree with this?
• Prove your points with examples taken from your life or surroundings.
Since change is natural and development is but change, the possibility for change in cultural values too is possible in today’s fast paced world. It is true to a great extent that, irrespective of place and time, development changes values.
6. Better teacher-student understanding and student-friendly academic ambience will be able to remove corporal punishment from schools for ever.
Essay 025
• How far do you agree or disagree with this?
There is saying: “spare the rode and spoil the child”. But studies show that sparing the rod may save a child, not spoil one. Since this finding goes exactly in line with the idea that teacher-student-friendly academic milieu will spare the rod for ever, I for one stand for such a student-friendly school.
Thursday, April 7, 2011
Since employees of an organization / are of heterogeneous (different) nature / in terms of their backgrounds, attitudes and behaviours, / it is of no use to apply / a defined set of rules and regulations / which, in some people’s opinion, / all the employees may not be able to abide by.
Argue for and against this view.
A general code of conduct is followed in almost all organizations. But, looking at the workforce mix, some people support this uniform set of rules and regulations, and there are opposing views as well. This essay tries to see both.
As a matter of fact, no organization can expect its workers to be obeying alike, behaving alike and having similar attitudes. People are different in more ways than one. In such a diverse employment platform, applying a uniform code of conduct may not be comfortable for all. For example; it is expected of all employees to be sticking to certain common rules and regulations. These conditions may be acceptable for all. But this is not possible all the time, especially when individuals of different nature happen to have trying times in their personal or family life when they may have to forego company rules.
That everyone is different, however, does not make a uniform set of rules and regulations any irrelevant. This is extremely important in the sense that organization is group of people headed by an investor whose aim is to make it run smoothly. This trouble-free running does demand a set of rules and regulations. For example, conditions like reporting in time, being responsible, respecting the hierarchy, reporting absence in advance and the like are very much important. Here there is no room for the idea, “I am different, and I cannot follow all the rules like others do”. There needs a common set of terms and conditions for the common good of all.
In short, both the arguments have their own takers. But, the fact is that an organization is a place where people of diverse nature get together for a common cause. In such a place personal differences, I feel, should take a back seat.
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Argue for and against this view.
A general code of conduct is followed in almost all organizations. But, looking at the workforce mix, some people support this uniform set of rules and regulations, and there are opposing views as well. This essay tries to see both.
As a matter of fact, no organization can expect its workers to be obeying alike, behaving alike and having similar attitudes. People are different in more ways than one. In such a diverse employment platform, applying a uniform code of conduct may not be comfortable for all. For example; it is expected of all employees to be sticking to certain common rules and regulations. These conditions may be acceptable for all. But this is not possible all the time, especially when individuals of different nature happen to have trying times in their personal or family life when they may have to forego company rules.
That everyone is different, however, does not make a uniform set of rules and regulations any irrelevant. This is extremely important in the sense that organization is group of people headed by an investor whose aim is to make it run smoothly. This trouble-free running does demand a set of rules and regulations. For example, conditions like reporting in time, being responsible, respecting the hierarchy, reporting absence in advance and the like are very much important. Here there is no room for the idea, “I am different, and I cannot follow all the rules like others do”. There needs a common set of terms and conditions for the common good of all.
In short, both the arguments have their own takers. But, the fact is that an organization is a place where people of diverse nature get together for a common cause. In such a place personal differences, I feel, should take a back seat.
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Presenting age groups while attending task one in ielts.
Age groups
• 5-12, 13-19, 20-29, 30-39, 40-49,50-59, 60+ (above)
• Teens, Under 30s, 40s, 50, 60, 70+
• 11-18, 20-26, 27-34, 35-45, 46-55, 55 and above
1. Children in their 5-12 age group
2. Those in their teens
3. Youngsters in their 20-30 age group
4. Those who are in their 40-49 years
5. The older age groups like 50-59 and 60 and above
6. People in their middle age like 35-45 years
7. The age groups 20-29, and 30-39
8. As people grow older, say, when they are their 50s
9. While people are younger, say when they are under 30 years
10. Senior citizens in their 60s and 70s
11. Students in their teens
12. children above five and below ten years
13. Boys in their teens
14. Girls in their teens
15. People in their 20s and 30s
16. Under 30s
17. Those who are under their 30s
18. When younger age groups, older age groups like,,,
19. While males in their 20s………females in the same age groups…..
20. The corresponding figures of the age group 30-40
Age groups
• 5-12, 13-19, 20-29, 30-39, 40-49,50-59, 60+ (above)
• Teens, Under 30s, 40s, 50, 60, 70+
• 11-18, 20-26, 27-34, 35-45, 46-55, 55 and above
1. Children in their 5-12 age group
2. Those in their teens
3. Youngsters in their 20-30 age group
4. Those who are in their 40-49 years
5. The older age groups like 50-59 and 60 and above
6. People in their middle age like 35-45 years
7. The age groups 20-29, and 30-39
8. As people grow older, say, when they are their 50s
9. While people are younger, say when they are under 30 years
10. Senior citizens in their 60s and 70s
11. Students in their teens
12. children above five and below ten years
13. Boys in their teens
14. Girls in their teens
15. People in their 20s and 30s
16. Under 30s
17. Those who are under their 30s
18. When younger age groups, older age groups like,,,
19. While males in their 20s………females in the same age groups…..
20. The corresponding figures of the age group 30-40
There is a growing tendency among poor nations to allow foreign universities to provide education by establishing the latter’s own academic institutions inside the country. This development is both advantageous and disadvantageous.
• Try to find out whether its advantages can outweigh its disadvantages.
Foreign Direct Investment (FDI) is increasingly being promoted by poor nations. As a result, many foreign universities are allowed to provide education directly to the growing economies. This is both advantageous and disadvantageous.
Let me identify the major advantages. The first thing is that it makes global education infrastructure local. As a result, people of developing economies can access world-class education without much effort. Secondly, the presence of foreign universities may encourage competition and, thereby, national universities will also go higher in quality standards. And thirdly, overseas education service providers in a nation gives a little fillip to overall academic infrastructure. This may ensure better Supply Chain Management (SCM) in education.
Moving on to the seamy side of this development, there are quiet a few things. The primary problem is that these universities are not going to provide education in the grassroots levels. This is followed by another pitfall that these education providers invest hugely and they expect great returns. Naturally, the fee structure will be unaffordable to the majority. Obviously, the democratic nature of education will get undermined.
Besides all these, there is yet another danger of over concentration on specialization in education. This makes the elites of developing nations reap the benefits leading to two types of educated workforce. And finally, to cap it all, there is a danger of manpower loss as well. People with the extra edge of foreign university education may go for greener pastures outside their nations. This is a national loss in many counts.
In short, allowing foreign universities to operate in developing nations is good to some extent. However, the above findings are enough to prove that its advantages in no way outweigh its disadvantages. There is great imbalance.
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• Try to find out whether its advantages can outweigh its disadvantages.
Foreign Direct Investment (FDI) is increasingly being promoted by poor nations. As a result, many foreign universities are allowed to provide education directly to the growing economies. This is both advantageous and disadvantageous.
Let me identify the major advantages. The first thing is that it makes global education infrastructure local. As a result, people of developing economies can access world-class education without much effort. Secondly, the presence of foreign universities may encourage competition and, thereby, national universities will also go higher in quality standards. And thirdly, overseas education service providers in a nation gives a little fillip to overall academic infrastructure. This may ensure better Supply Chain Management (SCM) in education.
Moving on to the seamy side of this development, there are quiet a few things. The primary problem is that these universities are not going to provide education in the grassroots levels. This is followed by another pitfall that these education providers invest hugely and they expect great returns. Naturally, the fee structure will be unaffordable to the majority. Obviously, the democratic nature of education will get undermined.
Besides all these, there is yet another danger of over concentration on specialization in education. This makes the elites of developing nations reap the benefits leading to two types of educated workforce. And finally, to cap it all, there is a danger of manpower loss as well. People with the extra edge of foreign university education may go for greener pastures outside their nations. This is a national loss in many counts.
In short, allowing foreign universities to operate in developing nations is good to some extent. However, the above findings are enough to prove that its advantages in no way outweigh its disadvantages. There is great imbalance.
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Wednesday, April 6, 2011
1.
There is a growing tendency among poor nations to allow foreign universities to provide education by establishing the latter’s own academic institutions inside the country. This development is both advantageous and disadvantageous.
• Try to find out whether its advantages can outweigh its disadvantages.
2.
Foreign universities, that provide education directly to poor nations’ premises, have huge fee structures, and this spiraling cost of education is justified by them claiming that quality education comes for a price.
• How justifiable is such a claim in your opinion?
There is a growing tendency among poor nations to allow foreign universities to provide education by establishing the latter’s own academic institutions inside the country. This development is both advantageous and disadvantageous.
• Try to find out whether its advantages can outweigh its disadvantages.
2.
Foreign universities, that provide education directly to poor nations’ premises, have huge fee structures, and this spiraling cost of education is justified by them claiming that quality education comes for a price.
• How justifiable is such a claim in your opinion?
Since employees of an organization / are of heterogeneous (different) nature / in terms of their backgrounds, attitudes and behaviours, / it is of no use to apply / a defined set of rules and regulations / which, in some people’s opinion, / all the employees may not be able to abide by.
How far do you agree or disagree with this argument?
Today, making all the employees follow a set of rules and regulations is challenging task indeed. However, as workers are different in nature, I think it is virtually impossible for a company to formulate different set of rules for different types of workers.
My one and only argument against the view expressed is that no company can have a smooth run with a workforce which is not governed by a set of rules. This is one of the basic requirements that make an organization really organized. For example, conditions like reporting in time, meeting deadlines, respecting the hierarchy, reporting absence in advance, safeguarding the interests of the organization and the like are for all the staff. On the other hand, if some of the employees fail to abide by all or any one of these common rules and regulations, it will be impossible to keep the show going smooth.
All the need for a set of rules notwithstanding, there is a little room for the thought that people are different in several different ways. For example, educational qualification, the type of family they belong to, the pressures of life people have, personality traits, attitude behaviour and so goes the list endlessly. As a matter of fact, this difference raises a few simple questions. Is working environment the right place for one to be different? No. Is it not a place where people of different nature get together for a common cause? Yes, it is, in many ways, I would say.
The above inferences make me stand against the view that there is no need for a uniform rules and regulations for all. Employees are different, and any one can very well differ, too, but it should not be at the cost of the organization itself.
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How far do you agree or disagree with this argument?
Today, making all the employees follow a set of rules and regulations is challenging task indeed. However, as workers are different in nature, I think it is virtually impossible for a company to formulate different set of rules for different types of workers.
My one and only argument against the view expressed is that no company can have a smooth run with a workforce which is not governed by a set of rules. This is one of the basic requirements that make an organization really organized. For example, conditions like reporting in time, meeting deadlines, respecting the hierarchy, reporting absence in advance, safeguarding the interests of the organization and the like are for all the staff. On the other hand, if some of the employees fail to abide by all or any one of these common rules and regulations, it will be impossible to keep the show going smooth.
All the need for a set of rules notwithstanding, there is a little room for the thought that people are different in several different ways. For example, educational qualification, the type of family they belong to, the pressures of life people have, personality traits, attitude behaviour and so goes the list endlessly. As a matter of fact, this difference raises a few simple questions. Is working environment the right place for one to be different? No. Is it not a place where people of different nature get together for a common cause? Yes, it is, in many ways, I would say.
The above inferences make me stand against the view that there is no need for a uniform rules and regulations for all. Employees are different, and any one can very well differ, too, but it should not be at the cost of the organization itself.
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Tuesday, April 5, 2011
Free movement of market, men and material across the world is taken as an opportunity by some people, but some others are of the opinion that it has made the world suffer from countless problems.
Essay 041
• How genuine are these views in your opinion?
Borderless movement is the order of the day and the same is going to stay, too. Naturally, there are differing views on its merits and demerits. What I feel is that it is more an opportunity than a problem. I can prove it, too.
Let me explain what all opportunities such a movement offers people. Firstly, it is market interplay. Nations, both rich are poor, interact and benefit each other by way of employment, tax and market penetration. Secondly, it is the movement of human resources. Human resource is a perishable one, but today there are opportunities across the world to make better use of one’s potentials for the welfare of the whole world. Being able to use one’s intellectual and physical strengths is much better than not using or under-using them. Thirdly, a free world order makes developments faster, so are the socio-economic conditions of the world.
However, all is not well with this all-encompassing world order. There is rich-poor divide getting widened thanks to movement of resources to more productive lands. Secondly, poor nations become unattractive even to their population due to the greener pastures offered by the world outside. Thirdly, there are cultural and traditional values that get deteriorated, and some of them even get extinct too. However, the fact remains that these are just the aftermaths of changes and influences.
In short, since this changed order is bound to be here for long, and there is no scope for any U turn, it is a good idea to identify the possibilities of it and try our best to manage the difficulties. Humans are intelligent enough to do so. 265 words Ajaypeesdoc
Essay 041
• How genuine are these views in your opinion?
Borderless movement is the order of the day and the same is going to stay, too. Naturally, there are differing views on its merits and demerits. What I feel is that it is more an opportunity than a problem. I can prove it, too.
Let me explain what all opportunities such a movement offers people. Firstly, it is market interplay. Nations, both rich are poor, interact and benefit each other by way of employment, tax and market penetration. Secondly, it is the movement of human resources. Human resource is a perishable one, but today there are opportunities across the world to make better use of one’s potentials for the welfare of the whole world. Being able to use one’s intellectual and physical strengths is much better than not using or under-using them. Thirdly, a free world order makes developments faster, so are the socio-economic conditions of the world.
However, all is not well with this all-encompassing world order. There is rich-poor divide getting widened thanks to movement of resources to more productive lands. Secondly, poor nations become unattractive even to their population due to the greener pastures offered by the world outside. Thirdly, there are cultural and traditional values that get deteriorated, and some of them even get extinct too. However, the fact remains that these are just the aftermaths of changes and influences.
In short, since this changed order is bound to be here for long, and there is no scope for any U turn, it is a good idea to identify the possibilities of it and try our best to manage the difficulties. Humans are intelligent enough to do so. 265 words Ajaypeesdoc
Space scientists around the world are exploring the possibilities of space tourism on a large scale as there are many takers for the same.
Essay 068
• Do you think it is a good idea to explore space for tourism?
• What disadvantages does such a move entail?
In this world of innovations and developments, space technology is advancing faster, and people are fascinated by this novel concept and its commercial possibilities in future. Though it is an interesting and trendsetting idea, its negative aspects cannot simply be ruled out.
If a concept like space tourism becomes real, it will be one of the huge achievements for humans. Touring through the space will offer chances to experience adventures appreciate the mystery and see the unseen and it would satisfy man’s long-cherished ambition. So it is clear that there are a lot of takers for this tourism, and it can be one of best platforms to make money from the otherwise useless outer space. And finally, those nations that achieve this technological fiat will surely enjoy international superiority.
Barring these brighter sides of this innovative concept, this has its own darker sides as well. The most prominent one is that this project requires huge investments by way of developing space vehicles, training of personnel; making space stations for stay etc. Another point is that it is very risky because the chances of success are equal to that of failures. Therefore, it will be a life and death proposition. In addition to all these, it may not be an accessible concept for the not-so-well off as it is highly expensive.
Thus, from the above inferences, it can be concluded that space tourism has equally powerful positive and negative aspects, but it does not seem to be bothering the negligibly small minority of the world that awaits it to become real.
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Essay 068
• Do you think it is a good idea to explore space for tourism?
• What disadvantages does such a move entail?
In this world of innovations and developments, space technology is advancing faster, and people are fascinated by this novel concept and its commercial possibilities in future. Though it is an interesting and trendsetting idea, its negative aspects cannot simply be ruled out.
If a concept like space tourism becomes real, it will be one of the huge achievements for humans. Touring through the space will offer chances to experience adventures appreciate the mystery and see the unseen and it would satisfy man’s long-cherished ambition. So it is clear that there are a lot of takers for this tourism, and it can be one of best platforms to make money from the otherwise useless outer space. And finally, those nations that achieve this technological fiat will surely enjoy international superiority.
Barring these brighter sides of this innovative concept, this has its own darker sides as well. The most prominent one is that this project requires huge investments by way of developing space vehicles, training of personnel; making space stations for stay etc. Another point is that it is very risky because the chances of success are equal to that of failures. Therefore, it will be a life and death proposition. In addition to all these, it may not be an accessible concept for the not-so-well off as it is highly expensive.
Thus, from the above inferences, it can be concluded that space tourism has equally powerful positive and negative aspects, but it does not seem to be bothering the negligibly small minority of the world that awaits it to become real.
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Foreign exchange earnings for Egypt
The two charts break up data on foreign exchange earnings of Egypt in 2002, and income from tourism for the years from 1982-2003.
The pie chart reveals that tourism gave Egypt the highest foreign exchange earning in 2002, 26% followed by industry with 21%. When workers’ remittance amounted from 21%, Agriculture brought in ten times less than that with 2%. Finally, Petroleum and Suez Canal managed to garner 14%, 13% each.
The bar chart on revenue from tourism shows an upward spiral from 1982 to 2000. It started off with 0.3 billion US Dollars in 1982 and it kept on increasing, and after 11 years, in 1993, it rose to 1.9 billion. There was a remarkable increase in the 1995-1997 period. It shot up to 2.9 from 2.2 billion. The year 2000 recorded the highest growth, from 2.9 to 4.3 billion. However, the two periods that followed had same figures: 3.8 billion each. But 2003 had the biggest fall; from 3.8 to two billion US Dollars.
It is clear that in the 80s and 90s the growth was slower but steady, but in 2000 onwards the figures were rather stable barring 2003.
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The two charts break up data on foreign exchange earnings of Egypt in 2002, and income from tourism for the years from 1982-2003.
The pie chart reveals that tourism gave Egypt the highest foreign exchange earning in 2002, 26% followed by industry with 21%. When workers’ remittance amounted from 21%, Agriculture brought in ten times less than that with 2%. Finally, Petroleum and Suez Canal managed to garner 14%, 13% each.
The bar chart on revenue from tourism shows an upward spiral from 1982 to 2000. It started off with 0.3 billion US Dollars in 1982 and it kept on increasing, and after 11 years, in 1993, it rose to 1.9 billion. There was a remarkable increase in the 1995-1997 period. It shot up to 2.9 from 2.2 billion. The year 2000 recorded the highest growth, from 2.9 to 4.3 billion. However, the two periods that followed had same figures: 3.8 billion each. But 2003 had the biggest fall; from 3.8 to two billion US Dollars.
It is clear that in the 80s and 90s the growth was slower but steady, but in 2000 onwards the figures were rather stable barring 2003.
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Monday, April 4, 2011
At a time when the need for wood as raw material for domestic and industrial purposes is increasing alarmingly, some people feel that promoting plastic as alternative to wood is a feasible idea.
Essay 018
• How good or bad is this idea in your opinion?
The need for wood as a raw material is high. However, the importance trees cannot be overlooked either in these carbon intensive days. In such a scenario, I think, it is a good idea to promote quality plastic, of course with certain conditions.
To begin with, quality plastic is highly durable, recyclable, cost-effective and easily manageable. For example, furnishing and fittings made of plastic last for a life time, and plastic saves a lot of time, energy and money by way of mass manufacturing, easy movement and cheaper price.
Another point is that, if it is accepted world over, industrial felling can be reduced greatly and the Planet will be able to breathe easy by way of greater green cover, carbon recycling and falling mercury levels. For example, green cover loss is caused more by industrial felling than by development. If this could be minimized, planet would be a better place to be in.
However, we need to put forth some conditions if plastic is to replace wood. Firstly, I think, it is mandatory for all nations that intend to promote plastic to have permanent recycling system in place. Secondly, there should not be any compromise on the provision that only durable, recyclable products are made. And, finally, there needs to be stringent laws governing quality standards.
It may be concluded that there is not going to be any fall in man’s need for raw materials. But the need for keeping trees is higher too. In such a state of affairs, plastic, it is proved, can do great service to mankind, if wisely managed.
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• How good or bad is this idea in your opinion?
The need for wood as a raw material is high. However, the importance trees cannot be overlooked either in these carbon intensive days. In such a scenario, I think, it is a good idea to promote quality plastic, of course with certain conditions.
To begin with, quality plastic is highly durable, recyclable, cost-effective and easily manageable. For example, furnishing and fittings made of plastic last for a life time, and plastic saves a lot of time, energy and money by way of mass manufacturing, easy movement and cheaper price.
Another point is that, if it is accepted world over, industrial felling can be reduced greatly and the Planet will be able to breathe easy by way of greater green cover, carbon recycling and falling mercury levels. For example, green cover loss is caused more by industrial felling than by development. If this could be minimized, planet would be a better place to be in.
However, we need to put forth some conditions if plastic is to replace wood. Firstly, I think, it is mandatory for all nations that intend to promote plastic to have permanent recycling system in place. Secondly, there should not be any compromise on the provision that only durable, recyclable products are made. And, finally, there needs to be stringent laws governing quality standards.
It may be concluded that there is not going to be any fall in man’s need for raw materials. But the need for keeping trees is higher too. In such a state of affairs, plastic, it is proved, can do great service to mankind, if wisely managed.
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Sunday, April 3, 2011
Though sportspersons do not seem to be doing much to the general well being of the public, they are given enormous benefits and rewards upon achievements.
• How right it is to say that sports icon don’t do much to public?
• How far do you endorse the rewards and honours they receive?
I do not need to think twice to say it is premature to claim that sports persons do not do much to public. They do much more than anyone else, and the rewards and honours they come to experience are what they very much deserve.
Let me prove that sports persons do much to public. A sports successful sports icon is one who works as the ambassador of a nation, torch bearer for the younger generation and, above all, the flag carrier of the nation. As we all know, sports is a huge industry which promotes allied trades and commerce, strengthens international relations and even acts as catalysts that mend long broken diplomatic relations.
Besides all these, it is right to say that sports persons are able to transform people and influence their attitudes to social and national causes. As a result, people look at them with great expectations and they in turn live up-to the expectations of the public. Are they not doing anything to the public? They are.
By the way, how are the public and nation going to reward them for all these services? Sports titles, honourary positions, degrees, entitlements and above all huge monetary rewards are a few tokens that make sportsperson motivated. For example, some governments offer monetary rewards, some universities honour them with doctorates and some institutions appoint sports icons as their ambassadors of social cause and national causes. Needless to say, it is all worth endorsing.
In short, sportspersons are flag carriers of a nation, and they do much to people directly and indirectly. But, for the ordinary public, their service may not be that visible. And the honours and rewards they enjoy, therefore, are much deserving as well. 270 words Ajaypeesdoc
Vocabulary:
• Premature Coherence/cohesion Task fulfillment
• Deserve Let me prove 270 words
• Ambassador As we all know Distinct five paragraphs
• Flag carrier Besides all these Example
• Allied trade and commerce As a result/above all One statement is proved wrong
• Catalyst By the way One part is fully endorsed
• Diplomatic relations For example Writer’s voice is heard
• Transform It is all
• Great expectations Needless to say Punctuation/typography
• Honorary position In short Right use of comma, full stop
• Entitlements But Question marks/hyphen
• Monitory rewards And/therefore
Grammar and structure
1. A sports successful sports icon is one who works as the ambassador of a nation, torch bearer for the younger generation and, above all, the flag carrier of the nation.
2. As we all know, sports is a huge industry which promotes allied trades and commerce, strengthens international relations and even acts as catalysts that mend long-broken diplomatic relations.
3. For example, some governments offer monetary rewards, some universities honour them with doctorates and some institutions appoint sports icons as their ambassadors of social cause and national causes.
It is an essay worth getting no less than 8.5
• How right it is to say that sports icon don’t do much to public?
• How far do you endorse the rewards and honours they receive?
I do not need to think twice to say it is premature to claim that sports persons do not do much to public. They do much more than anyone else, and the rewards and honours they come to experience are what they very much deserve.
Let me prove that sports persons do much to public. A sports successful sports icon is one who works as the ambassador of a nation, torch bearer for the younger generation and, above all, the flag carrier of the nation. As we all know, sports is a huge industry which promotes allied trades and commerce, strengthens international relations and even acts as catalysts that mend long broken diplomatic relations.
Besides all these, it is right to say that sports persons are able to transform people and influence their attitudes to social and national causes. As a result, people look at them with great expectations and they in turn live up-to the expectations of the public. Are they not doing anything to the public? They are.
By the way, how are the public and nation going to reward them for all these services? Sports titles, honourary positions, degrees, entitlements and above all huge monetary rewards are a few tokens that make sportsperson motivated. For example, some governments offer monetary rewards, some universities honour them with doctorates and some institutions appoint sports icons as their ambassadors of social cause and national causes. Needless to say, it is all worth endorsing.
In short, sportspersons are flag carriers of a nation, and they do much to people directly and indirectly. But, for the ordinary public, their service may not be that visible. And the honours and rewards they enjoy, therefore, are much deserving as well. 270 words Ajaypeesdoc
Vocabulary:
• Premature Coherence/cohesion Task fulfillment
• Deserve Let me prove 270 words
• Ambassador As we all know Distinct five paragraphs
• Flag carrier Besides all these Example
• Allied trade and commerce As a result/above all One statement is proved wrong
• Catalyst By the way One part is fully endorsed
• Diplomatic relations For example Writer’s voice is heard
• Transform It is all
• Great expectations Needless to say Punctuation/typography
• Honorary position In short Right use of comma, full stop
• Entitlements But Question marks/hyphen
• Monitory rewards And/therefore
Grammar and structure
1. A sports successful sports icon is one who works as the ambassador of a nation, torch bearer for the younger generation and, above all, the flag carrier of the nation.
2. As we all know, sports is a huge industry which promotes allied trades and commerce, strengthens international relations and even acts as catalysts that mend long-broken diplomatic relations.
3. For example, some governments offer monetary rewards, some universities honour them with doctorates and some institutions appoint sports icons as their ambassadors of social cause and national causes.
It is an essay worth getting no less than 8.5
Saturday, April 2, 2011
Some people say that it is a good idea to make periodic medical check ups compulsory for all adults so that the health status of a state can be better kept, whereas some others say maintaining health status is more personal than institutional.
• Look at both the views say what you feel about it?
It is a fact that health status involves several factors. Periodic medical check up is one of them. However, coming to compulsory medical check up, what is I is feel that keeping health status is more a personal responsibility than institutional.
Let me prove that compulsory medical check for adults cannot do much to the general health status of a populace. Undergoing medical check ups is one thing and going through a medical regime subsequent to a check is something different. In a national perspective, we cannot expect the whole adult population to be strictly following what ever is medically advised. Social status, per capita income, gender difference, nature of employment, to mention a few, of people may vary and not many can stick to the instructions given after every check up.
On the other hand, if people take it as a point that being healthy is something great and, thereby, able to understand that prevention is better than cure; they will be able to keep their health status all by themselves. For example, informed people will eat right, work out well, stay away from hazardous habits, go for periodic check ups and identify health risks in time, and they will invite medication whenever needed. This will lead to better health status, of course. So health status is more personal than institutional in many more ways than one.
Therefore, looking at both the views, I find it right to conclude that health status of a population is determined more by personal interests than by institutional involvement. Compulsory medical checkup is fine, but it is fine just for the sake of checkups, not for anything else, I tend to say.
Ajaypeesdoc
270 words
• Look at both the views say what you feel about it?
It is a fact that health status involves several factors. Periodic medical check up is one of them. However, coming to compulsory medical check up, what is I is feel that keeping health status is more a personal responsibility than institutional.
Let me prove that compulsory medical check for adults cannot do much to the general health status of a populace. Undergoing medical check ups is one thing and going through a medical regime subsequent to a check is something different. In a national perspective, we cannot expect the whole adult population to be strictly following what ever is medically advised. Social status, per capita income, gender difference, nature of employment, to mention a few, of people may vary and not many can stick to the instructions given after every check up.
On the other hand, if people take it as a point that being healthy is something great and, thereby, able to understand that prevention is better than cure; they will be able to keep their health status all by themselves. For example, informed people will eat right, work out well, stay away from hazardous habits, go for periodic check ups and identify health risks in time, and they will invite medication whenever needed. This will lead to better health status, of course. So health status is more personal than institutional in many more ways than one.
Therefore, looking at both the views, I find it right to conclude that health status of a population is determined more by personal interests than by institutional involvement. Compulsory medical checkup is fine, but it is fine just for the sake of checkups, not for anything else, I tend to say.
Ajaypeesdoc
270 words
Friday, April 1, 2011
Five questions: on career.
1.
Working environments over the years have been witnessing changes of different dimensions like longer working hours, round the clock shifts and the like. Some people say this shift has made human life better, whereas there are others who take it the other way round.
• Which view do you support and state why?
2.
Working environments over the years have been witnessing changes of different dimensions like longer working hours, round the clock shifts and the like. Some people feel that all these changes are more advantageous for the employers than for employees.
• How far do you agree or disagree with the view expressed?
3.
Change is the order of the day and great many people are able to adapt themselves to changes. But there are some others who are unable to change.
• How good is it to be changing with the times in your opinion?
• Look at the dangers of not being able to change?
4.
Some people, out of unwise or inadvertent career selection, happen to land in uncomfortable jobs. But some people make the best out of such jobs, whereas some others keep worrying about their decision/s.
• Do you think it is a wise idea to make the best out of the job by adapting to it?
• Identify a few suggestions to get over such professional mistakes?
5.
Today, the road to a successful career is not so smoothly paved. Obviously, there are challenges en route.
• What challenges do you identify?
• Are such challenges good or for professionals?
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1.
Working environments over the years have been witnessing changes of different dimensions like longer working hours, round the clock shifts and the like. Some people say this shift has made human life better, whereas there are others who take it the other way round.
• Which view do you support and state why?
2.
Working environments over the years have been witnessing changes of different dimensions like longer working hours, round the clock shifts and the like. Some people feel that all these changes are more advantageous for the employers than for employees.
• How far do you agree or disagree with the view expressed?
3.
Change is the order of the day and great many people are able to adapt themselves to changes. But there are some others who are unable to change.
• How good is it to be changing with the times in your opinion?
• Look at the dangers of not being able to change?
4.
Some people, out of unwise or inadvertent career selection, happen to land in uncomfortable jobs. But some people make the best out of such jobs, whereas some others keep worrying about their decision/s.
• Do you think it is a wise idea to make the best out of the job by adapting to it?
• Identify a few suggestions to get over such professional mistakes?
5.
Today, the road to a successful career is not so smoothly paved. Obviously, there are challenges en route.
• What challenges do you identify?
• Are such challenges good or for professionals?
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