educating the young whose responsibility. an ielts essay frame

Educating the young
Family’s job or state’s job

Introduction
Educating the young is of paramount importance.
Education is a social institution involving huge infrastructure and investment and planning. It is a huge responsibility shared by all.

First paragraph

As a matter of fact, every family has the primary responsibility.
Children need to get education of their choice
Parents alone can choose the right school and course
Every student is different the same way every family is.
The primary beneficiary is the family. Society and state follow

Second paragraph
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On the other hand, the State too should share the job.
Future of the state is the hands of the young.
Educated generation is the wealth of the nation.
So ensuring education is the constitutional job of the Govt. too.
Educating a generation is a huge job involving:
finance, infrastructure, planning, curriculum formation, implementation.

To conclude

It is right to conclude that:
It is the collective obligation of the families and the State
Not all families are able to educate their children.
So, the state should ensure enough facilities:
Better standard of living: healthylearning atmosphere etc.