Thursday, December 4, 2008

investing education a skeleton ielts essay

Some people say that investing in healthcare and education is much more importance than investing in industries, research and development. Some others hold a view the other way round.

Which view do you advocate, and why? Prove your points with examples.


Introductory phrases
· There is room for controversy
· Different people have different views on this.
· People differ in their opinion on this.
· There will be difference in opinion on this.
More important: Education and health
Or research and development.
· They are equally important.

First paragraph
Why equally important:

· Healthy population is the wealth of the nation
· Quality manpower is the strength of the nation.
· Poor health and poor education will spoil the nation.
Example:
Second paragraph

· Everything is based on these:
· Including industries, research and development.
· No industry, research and development is possible.
Example:
· It is crucial that they need to be treated equally.


Concluding phrases
· They are mutually contributory
· We cannot isolate one from the other
· It is foolish to separate them.
· It is good to be having a balanced approach.
2/12/08

Some people say that investing in healthcare and education is as important as investing in industries and infrastructure development.

How far do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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