Sunday, December 7, 2008

Helping others: the whys and hows. ielts essay

YOu may find a lot many points in a skeleton. But you are supposed to take only 4 and they should be prioritised as to give the essay a logical look. Try to prove your points with examples taken from your life. Don't go to antarctica to find examples.
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Helping others is very much part of all cultures around the world, but these days there is a growing tendency among people to neither offer help nor receive it.

Why is this change of attitude towards?
How does it influence the society?

Intro:
All social institutions are meant for mutual benefit.
Society is a perfect blend of people, both rich and poor
life is unpredictable, and it is important to help and be helped.
Helping others is rewarding and denying help is unfair.
Human society cannot exist without help,


Why it is common
1. Societies have developed in all respects.
2. Socio economic status is on the rise.
3. People attach pride and prestige with their well being.
4. For some it is inferior and shame to be helped.
5. Modern parents independent and they make their kids so too.
6. Selfishness is on the rise and the mad rush for once needs
7. All are out for a better life for themselves.
8. Helping others brings problems too. Generosity excploited
9. People more worried about their well being than others’
10. Rising power of money, and popularity of materialism.
How does it affect:

Human society is impossible.
It is hard to predict when one needs help or what
Helping others will make the life of others better
No helping others is not a sign of civilization.
A great deal of change in the society is due to mutual help.
No help means, no harmonious life
Selfishness will lead to greed and greed to crimes.
The poor of the society will always be poor
Many may be deprived of a better life unless there is help.
All faiths promote helping others.

Conclude:

It is quite human to help others
Is it possible to live a good life without help
Society exits more out of helping others than out of anything
It is no good sigh that society goes away from the virtues of help
It is important that we help others and we accept it when we need it.


A candidate is supposed to take only 4 points from the effects and four from affects and one each from introduction and conclusion.
Jaypee. 8/12/08. always believe that an essay is an opportunity to test you

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