This task 2 answers is from one of my online learners Binil mathew
Under length, Binil,
it fails the task
However, let me see
Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding
parties ,birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money
.Others, however, think that these are necessary for individual and the
society. Discuss both views and give you
opinion.
Throwing up parties
has always been a practice in all societies . However, there are a few who feel that the same is worthless
.This write up is an attempt to see both the
sides.
Parties like wedding, birthday and other celebrations are
able to create better teams and relationships among individuals. For example, while
conducting business parties, company executives would get a better platform to plan their
future endeavours and such parties will have a sense of success .This will be a
motivation for the team members and
employees. Apart from these, some good memories could be kept in mind in the
form of photographs which are taken during
parties.
On the other hand, some people think that holding parties is
not worth it in anyway as they cost a lot . Since a great majority of people go to bed hungry, it would
not be good to set aside exorbitant amounts for throwing parties . Moreover, some
narrow minded individuals might hold the opinion that parties will never
exchange any kinds of values but they are just show offs that make a few look
bigger in front of others. Some kind of pride gained at the cost of money.
My conclusion is holding parties according to the needs or importance holds a little more water than it
is conducted otherwise. Parities are fine, but not at cost of hell of money.
6 would have been the score had it been long enough Binil. it was short by 25 words.
see the highlighted areas where you had had a mistake. check it with the original..
Work on, anyway. Good luck
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