TRY TO ANALYSE THE FOLLOWING TWO SENTENCES. INDEPENDENT CLAUSE, DEPENDED CLAUSES, PHRASES, TENSE, VOCABULARLY, PUNCTUATION, WORD ORDER AND SO GOES THE THINGS TO BE LOOKED INTO.

Sentence one:
We are living in a world where everything is in a fast pace making modern man rush all the time so that he is able to meet his personal, social, professional and even spiritual requirements in the limited 24 hours’ time which unfortunately has been equal for all for ages and ages, not matter what one is, who one has become, what one has done, and above all, what one intents to be or to be doing in the ages to come, starting from this very moment, and time per say is extremely precious; its management, in my opinion is of course a fine art. 100 words


We are living/ in a world/ where everything is in a fast pace/ making modern man rush/ all the time/ so that he is able to meet/ his personal, social, professional and even spiritual requirements/ in the limited 24 hours’ time/ which/ unfortunately/ has been equal for all/ for ages and ages, not matter what one is, /who one has become, /what one has done, /and above all, /what one intents to be/ or to be doing in the ages to come, /starting from this very moment, /; and time, per say, is extremely precious; its management, in my opinion is of course a fine art. 100 words
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Sentence 2.
The internet as a network of channels, portals, platforms and medias of different dimensions and potentials has been working wonders in the lives of man ever since its inception which happened some 25 years in the developed world first, and in course of time got spread across all corners of the world opening opportunities for all the digitally educated and making the world a village of virtual information and interaction, a condition that makes modern man able to be present anywhere, anytime, any longer not having the need for being physically present, but being electronically engaged all the time; day in and day out or what we call 24x7, or otherwise is called being in the cyber landscape. 120 words

The Internet/ as a network of channels, portals, platforms and medias of different dimensions and potentials/ has been working wonders in the lives of man/ ever since its inception which happened some 25 years ago in the developed world first, / and in course of time got spread across all corners of the world / opening opportunities for all the digitally educated / and making the world a village / of virtual information and interaction, / a condition that makes modern man able to be present anywhere, anytime, any longer / not having the need for being physically present, but being electronically engaged all the time;/ day in and day out or what we call 24x7, or otherwise it is called being in the cyber landscape. 120 words