Very
well balanced work, with enough English stuff to make a seven for sure.
The pictograph gives an
overview of two possible sites for a proposed super market in Garlsdon town
with a population of 65,000.
Broadly speaking, the site
one has access to both road and railways and is located outside the town
whereas the site two is in the city centre within the no traffic zone.
Site one is situated in
the north-west side of Garlsdon and close to Hindon-12 km away .Also, people
from other two places -Bransdon, Cransdon-would access this site by railways
and main roads.
On the other hand, the site two
is proposed in the town centre, particularly in no traffic zone. Noticeably,
people from Hindon and Cransdon would come to this site through railways only. But,
the second proposed site is close to housing.
To conclude, even though the
site one has the advantages like good location close to housing, city centre
and access to railways, it would be
better to choose the site one, because of both types of
commuter ways as well as space for vehicle parking are there.
The
conclusion does not need to be this long, though.
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