Friday, July 29, 2011

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Ecological benefit is taken by ecologists as a viable option to maintain green cover. But there is an argument that this will halt growth as the benefit offered may not be at par with the production, if the land is used differently.

Discuss both the views and say what you feel about the concept.
Ecological benefit: an allowance paid to those landowners who have some measures of green cover and are ready to keep it in tact for the well-being of the planet.
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Speedy carbon recycling is the need of the hour and ecologists find ecological benefit as a feasible option. But the concern that it would slow down growth is not unfounded. I feel that ecological benefit is worth promoted.

It is the talk of the world that our planet need to be protected from the peril of carbon. Since green cover is the only solution, ecologists are of the view that the existing green need to keep to meet the challenges. Naturally, there is need for individual participation. This in turn demand government support. If governments can meet the expectation of people who has their own green cover, they would kept it for the well being of the world. So offering decent ecological benefits to individuals would help a lot in making the Planet breath easy.

However mere green coven maintenance wouldn’t meet the needs of the world population. The concern that it would slowdown growth needs to address. Today humans are much better placed with efficient technologies to be applied in agriculture to augment production. There are research and development options to meet the rising need of man too. Finally human themselves can control population. This will keep his need controled and the Planet may be eased to keep the population feed well.

Looking at both the views it is right to concluded that future of the Planet lying on the hands of all individual and uniform participation alone would make a difference in carbon management. Ecological benefit sound so excellent a concept to me.

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