Wednesday, January 21, 2009

Private healthcare: Advantages and disadvantages> IELTS essay

  1. Though healthcare sectors in developing nations are increasingly being privatized, private participation offers great advantages to the people. There are some disadvantages, too.

    What do you think are its advantages and disadvantages?

    Intro:
    Basic requirement
    Needs to be available to all
    Generally:govt.’s job.
    Satisfying a huge population
    Rising health awareness
    Right to health is fundamental

    Advt:
    World class medical infrastructure
    Renowned medical professionals
    Complicated tests, procedures
    Falling mortality and morbidity rates
    Life saving medicines:
    24/7 service available


    Disads:
    Skyrocketing medical bills: it is an industry
    Medical innovations to the rich alone
    Unethical medical practices: Rackets
    Promotes Pharmacos, practitioners
    Undervalues public health sector
    Widens the rich poor health indices gap
    Concl:
    Three As of medical care: Accessible, affordable, acceptable.
    Getting medical care is more important
    Life is precious, and medical care is must
    Private or public: healthcare is a must
    It is a matter of life and death at times
    Disads can be solved to some extent.

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    NOTE: you need to write not much more than 250 words. so decide on how many points you need to satisfy that word limit. Do not overwrite too much.

275 words

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