Friday, January 23, 2009

Uneven distribution of global resources IELTS essay

It is believed that 80% of the resources of the world are held by 20% of the population, and the rest of the world population is sharing the remaining 20% resources.

How does this disparity affect the world community?
Do you think this gap could be bridged someway?

Intro:

The world has the resources to feed the people
It is really unfair of the world community to..
It is not the shortage of resources but the
It is a fact that this world is rich enough
Man is the worst enemy of man. It is his greed..

Effects:
Poor socio-economic status in the poor nations
Poor become poorer and rich richer
The power of the rich make the poor insecure
Millions die of poverty and lack of basic needs
Tension between the rich and poor nations mounts
Uneven distribution creates imbalances of all sorts
Societies around the world would fight for food
Technological, scientific, medical finds will benefit a few

It could be bridged:

The world forums like UN must step in
All the rich must realize that there are poor
IMF, World Bank etc. may offer soft loans to the poor
Globalization needs to be redefined as global distribution
Innovations of all types should be pooled under a UN like body
There should be income and wealth ceiling
Poor nations need to strive hard to succeed.
Concl:
This world is a beautiful place to be in
It is a sin to be rich when the world around remains poor
The rich have a role to play to bridge the gap
Resources are for the well being of all, including ecology
Man is not the master of the world, but he is just part of the system



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