Sunday, March 1, 2015

Job satisfaction and life. Ms. Dalia's essay

Take it as a model for all the four exam components. Vocabulary, pargraphing, task and grammar.

Nowadays people think that the most important thing in life is job satisfaction. Without excellent career life is meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A work by Ms Dalia Joy
Brilliant work Dalia!!

The world has been experiencing a shift in its attitude to job since man started organized life. Of late, people think that job satisfaction is the most important fact in thing in life. Certainly, there is some substance in this view. But I would say an emphatic no to this view. 50

In this fast-paced world, people are much more glued to their job than anything else. This is the primary reason for people’s attraction to careers. Let me substantiate it. People spend most of their time in their workplaces. This will naturally make them job-focused. And, obviously, their only thirst is bettering their career. These employees will naturally get lured to their job satisfaction. 60

The second argument behind this love for job is the competitiveness. People are more and more competing and greedy. Everyone wants to be in the first place. The lucrative jobs make them have hefty dreams.  So people again give job satisfaction a prime position. For instance, big companies provide better remuneration for good performers. This will gradually make people happy to go after career and the satisfaction it offers. 65

Though excellent jobs provide greater satisfaction, many personal losses are at the cost of this. Interpersonal relationships and bonding between family members are waning out. A lot of wealth or posh life cannot provide peace for mind. All these competitions of the world would reach at a saturation point. By the time people realize the truth, the time might have hijacked their whole life. 65
To conclude, job satisfaction has a role in life, but it must not take away the meaning of life. Life has much more to offer than what a satisfying job is likely to offer. My disagreement with the given view is made clear. 40
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