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Some people say urgent
problems in modern society can only be solved with international cooperation.
Do you agree or disagree?
A write –up by Ms Christy Mary
Hats off Christy Mary!!!
Problems
are part and parcel of every society. These problems cannot be avoided but
could be solved. Indeed problem solving is skill that is required in everyday
life, and it is present in very individual as well as society. So I do not
agree with the opinion that urgent problems in modern society can only be
solved with international cooperation. 60
When
a problem arises in a society, that society becomes unstable. Other countries
can take advantage of this instability if such problems are taken up to the
international level. For example, if a religious conflict occurs in any part of
India and it receives international attention, our enemies like Pakistan and
China will be looking forward for such an opportunity to encroach out borders
as they know that our defense community will be engaged otherwise. So,
taking problems out is like inviting
more and more disturbances. 90
Solving
a problem ourselves indicates that we have reached the level of self-realization.
Such a society is stable, unified and powerful. So we should search for
alternatives to solve the problems before seeking outside help. There is a
saying that, ‘too many cooks spoil the broth’. It holds true here as outsiders
may come up with different solutions that may even cause more problems. The
people of that society which face the problem are the sufferers, and no one can
help them more than what they could do
for themselves. 90
However,
international problems like terrorism, global warming and the like which affect
every nation could be solved by international cooperation. But the same
strategy does not work for every problem arising within a community however urgent it is. 35
In
short, solving problems ourselves is more advantageous than seeking outside
help. All societies have their resources
and brains within them to solve problems. Then, why should a society borrow
help? So, I have all the reasons to go with self reliance, and the view that
international cooperation is the only solution is not agreeable. 50
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