Thursday, April 16, 2015

Anu FROM Arabia writes disagreeing on confidence and competition

Anu From Arabia writes on confidence Vs. competition

Competition as a basic human instinct is able to do as much favour for human betterment as confidence is (able to).

Do you agree or disagree with this view?

Regardless of age and sex, people rely on (regular tense form, not continuous)  some instincts like confidence and competition for their betterment even in this modern era. As both (plural) seem to be appropriate in terms of doing favours, I totally disagree with the statement, and consider optimism has a lot more to offer competition.

                     It is well understood that confidence is just an inner feeling of being positive in the midst of plenty of challenges ( you cannot say aplenty challenges, I corrected it before) .It neither (singular Anu) causes conflicts or negative impact among people. Likewise, people used to ( what is used to adopt and just adopt? Adopt is right. Used to is past) opt many ways in order to achieve success, but confidence is considered to be the initial step for it. Besides, it helps people to look forward and to be proactive in difficult situations. Additionally, even society has greater inclination towards it for its immense effect on human beings. The increased numbers of seminars and lectures being conducted to arouse the confidence among people, especially among children, exemplify this fact.

Moreover, people ( anu, People is plural, I am angry, not has but have)  have got all the benefits from being confident all the time. Since the beginning of time, everyone has had the drive to have this capacity for betterment. Even great many people in the past had benefited from  it. The great King Alexander was one among them. Therefore, the proved examples of such people enable people to gain the needed self-esteem and enjoy betterment in their respective lives.

Furthermore, it is relevant to say that the challenges and hindrance are on the rise in this world of virtual possibilities. Being confident all the way is one way and best way to surmount (not arrest)   those obstacles and march forward.

From the above mentioned points, it is made apparent that confidence has more salutary components to offer for humanity (you cannot say, more rather than, either rather than or more than) than competition has. It would be right to add that a confident world is likely to be more comfortable than a competing world.


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