Anu From Arabia writes on confidence Vs. competition
Competition as a
basic human instinct is able to do as much favour for human betterment as
confidence is (able to).
Do you agree or
disagree with this view?
Regardless of age and sex, people rely on (regular tense form, not
continuous) some instincts like
confidence and competition for their betterment even in this modern era. As
both (plural) seem to be appropriate
in terms of doing favours, I totally disagree with the statement, and consider optimism has a lot more to offer
competition.
It is well understood that
confidence is just an inner feeling of being positive in the midst of plenty of challenges ( you cannot
say aplenty challenges, I corrected it before) .It neither (singular
Anu) causes conflicts or negative
impact among people. Likewise, people used to ( what is used to adopt and just adopt?
Adopt is right. Used to is past) opt many ways in order to
achieve success, but confidence is considered to be the initial step for it.
Besides, it helps people to look
forward and to be proactive in difficult situations. Additionally, even society
has greater inclination towards it for its
immense effect on human beings. The
increased numbers of seminars and lectures being conducted to arouse the
confidence among people, especially among children, exemplify this fact.
Moreover, people ( anu, People is
plural, I am angry, not has but have) have got all the benefits from being
confident all the time. Since the beginning of time, everyone has had the drive to have this capacity for
betterment. Even great many people in the past had benefited from it. The great King Alexander was one among
them. Therefore, the proved examples of such people enable people to gain the needed
self-esteem and enjoy betterment in their respective lives.
Furthermore, it is relevant to
say that the challenges and hindrance are on the rise in this world of virtual possibilities. Being
confident all the way is one way and best way to surmount (not arrest) those obstacles and march forward.
From the above mentioned points,
it is made apparent that confidence has more salutary components to offer for humanity
(you cannot say, more rather than, either rather than
or more than) than competition has. It would be right to add that a confident world is likely to be more
comfortable than a competing world.
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