Thursday, December 4, 2014

Long haul travels, greater and fewer apprehensions. biji scotland

Generally, long haul travelers are always apprehensive of the place they are going to visit. Some people are of the view that such apprehensions are much higher in number today than it was; while others say that it is the other way around.

·        Discuss both the views and say what you feel of the second view?

These days many people are of the opinion that people are more concerned about their long distance journeys than they used to (more than, not more compared to) . Many, however, disagree with this point.  Let me discuss these views and state what I feel of the latter view.

It is true to say that people are always worrying about the place where they are going to visit. Its severity is higher in the case of long journeys.  As compared to the past, this apprehension is much lesser  these days. It is mainly because of the advancements in the field of technology. Nowadays, sophisticated communication systems allow people to contact the world around them in  seconds. So, they can plan and arrange everything according to their needs. For example, people can book their hotel, arrange guide, and contact their friends or relatives as soon as they reach that place. This would definitely ease their tension and make their journey more comfortable.

On the other hand, opponents may believe that these tensions were higher in the past. In the bygone days, long travels journey much fewer than today due to lack of facilities. Even though people were interested, it was not possible due to lack of development in the field of technology, transport and international agreements. At that time, long journey was problematic. For instance, they did not have many contacts or they had to fall back on themselves until they came back. So, undoubtedly any one can say that long travel was really stressful and fearful. No it is much easier.

From the above mentioned points, it can be concluded that, today long haul travellers are experiencing relaxed and stress-free journeys than it was in the past. 

Biji, the first view is: apprehensions are much greater today than it was. The second one is it is much fewer today than it was. There could be past references, but it is not too much about how it was like in the past. Rather, today, there are reasons for great apprehensions, and at the same time, there are reasons for fewer apprehensions, with reference to the past obviously.
Barring  this slight slip and jumper order of the answer, I would have rated this essay for clean seven, but What happened to the part of the question that what you feel of the second opinion? What you have said is --- what others say--- not what you say of the second view.

That task failure will cost you dearly, and score will be 6 unless the graph answer is so strong



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